Park Chu-young transferred from FC Arsenal to Celta de vigo. Is he able to win success in Primera Liga?
Primera Liga in Spain is commonly listed as one of the best soccer leagues. Because they of their speed and shooting skills, FC Barcelona, Real Madrid are considered one of the best clubs in the world. So, every player want to play in Primera Liga.
But, Korean players often have had trouble adjusting to playing in La Liga. Footballer Lee Chun-soo was the first Korean player to play in Spain. But, he finally withered on the vine. Like him, the second player Lee Ho-jin failed too.
It was in the best interests not merely of Korean footballers, but of Asian players. Also, many Asian players tasted the bitterness in La Liga. There was much discussion ablout the reasons for the failure. They had much experience but , they had not enough ablility. Furthermore, there was a communication problem within team.
Park Chu-young transferred from FC Arsenal to Celta de vigo recently. He got himself listed as the top scorer in AS Monaco, and shepherded South Korea into the round of 16 in the South African World Cup. He is without doubt a top player in Asia. He was twice involved in Celta's first goal. The value of him will further give an impetus to playing in La Liga for Asians.
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I think that you did more work that you had to. For this assignment, I stated that you only needed to do a summary (not paraphrase/complete translation. However, doing more than required is not a bad thing :-) I obviously didn't make this clear because I'm adding this same message to many of the postings.
ReplyDelete"one of the best soccer league" -> "leagues"
"Because" + a dependent clause has to be attached to an independent clause -> "Because they of their speed and shooting skills, FC Seoul is considered one of the best clubs in Korea."
Professor, Thank you for your comment:)
ReplyDeleteI have corrected everything you have pointed out.